Please, be gentle.

[john jako]

My favourite part of being a whore would probably be clean sheets on a daily basis too. Hopefully they'd be some of the nice Egyptian cotton ones you can get off BidUp TV

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You do finished it yet? Is it worth a read?

 

[Brendan Janus]

The short synopsis is this:

Dara is a young woman being sold to a whorehouse in a world reaching it`s expiring date. After being battered senseless by a customer, she is mended by a weird physician, that replaces her left eye with a crystal, making her able to see in total darkness. Which becomes handy since the sun is burning out, and the world keeps getting darker. She gets pregnant by the attacker, and she seeks out revenge. A single-mom with weapons, and an agenda, during the end of days.

Certainly believable !!

 

[Frankattack]

I failed to mention it's going to be released in small installments. In other words, it's kind of a serial.

 

[heatmeiser]

I failed to mention it's going to be released in small installments. In other words, it's kind of a serial.

140 characters at a time?

 

[Frankattack]

140 characters at a time?

No, the plan is to release between 20 and 30 tweets each session.

 

[COYBL25]

Have you thought about a " graphic novel " rather than a novel per se ?.

When I read it, I thought immediately of graphic novels which are of a similar genre.

Also the pic of the girl, who the storie about, already looks like character from a graphic novel ?



Just my observations mate x

 

[degsy]

So, here it is. I am no writer nor have English as a first language, so I`ve decided to write a novel in English. Furthermore, I`m publishing it on Twitter. It`s called The Darkland Stories, and if you would be so kind to read the first installment, and maybe even follow me on Twitter, it would be appreciated.

Here`s the link:

https://twitter.com/DarklandStories

I've read worse

 

[Frankattack]

Have you thought about a " graphic novel " rather than a novel per se ?.

When I read it, I thought immediately of graphic novels which are of a similar genre.

Also the pic of the girl, who the storie about, already looks like character from a graphic novel ?

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Just my observations mate x

I see your points, and I hesitate to call it a novel. I guess it is a mix of all genres since I use an artist to illustrate as I go along. And as long I can afford it

 

[Frankattack]

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I take that as a compliment.

 

[Kiwi]

what if I'd rather some 50 shades?

 

[COYBL25]

I see your points, and I hesitate to call it a novel. I guess it is a mix of all genres since I use an artist to illustrate as I go along. And as long I can afford it

In reality " graphic novels " aren't really novels either when you think about it.

Just something to think about maybe ?.

Or possibly turn it into a super hero character based comic type publication ?

 

[BlueLlama]

Tag me in when there's a lesbian fisting scene

 

[degsy]

So, here it is. I am no writer nor have English as a first language, so I`ve decided to write a novel in English. Furthermore, I`m publishing it on Twitter. It`s called The Darkland Stories, and if you would be so kind to read the first installment, and maybe even follow me on Twitter, it would be appreciated.

Here`s the link:

https://twitter.com/DarklandStories

I saw the 140 characters comment and think they have a point. Even in these days of short attention span, me, me, me, now, now, now, it's a bit sparse.

The first few tweets show you've covered the 'Darkside' bit

You've posted the plot lines, all that remains is to get to the 'Story' bit and expand the plot lines.
I know for me when you write it flows, you can't get it on the page quick enough, and you daren't stop writing in case the words stop flowing.

Depending how much you expand on the plot lines, the number of words you write can almost be any amount.
I use a free site called short-fiction.co.uk which publish stories of all genres, but you still retain copyright. ( no prizes for which is the most popular category)

 

[Rob17896]

I'll take 50 copies, are there pictures?

Bungle. Yes and you are in them. Contact me directly to pay up before I post them for all to see. Not that there is much to see.

 

[Tubey]

The short synopsis is this:

Dara is a young woman being sold to a whorehouse in a world reaching it`s expiring date. After being battered senseless by a customer, she is mended by a weird physician, that replaces her left eye with a crystal, making her able to see in total darkness. Which becomes handy since the sun is burning out, and the world keeps getting darker. She gets pregnant by the attacker, and she seeks out revenge. A single-mom with weapons, and an agenda, during the end of days.

I must admit, with that premise, the thread title would have been a darker title for your novel!