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So, here it is. I am no writer nor have English as a first language, so I`ve decided to write a novel in English. Furthermore, I`m publishing it on Twitter. It`s called The Darkland Stories, and if you would be so kind to read the first installment, and maybe even follow me on Twitter, it would be appreciated.

Here`s the link:

https://twitter.com/DarklandStories

Will have a read later if I can mate. Can you put a short synopsis on here?
 
The short synopsis is this:

Dara is a young woman being sold to a whorehouse in a world reaching it`s expiring date. After being battered senseless by a customer, she is mended by a weird physician, that replaces her left eye with a crystal, making her able to see in total darkness. Which becomes handy since the sun is burning out, and the world keeps getting darker. She gets pregnant by the attacker, and she seeks out revenge. A single-mom with weapons, and an agenda, during the end of days.
 
The short synopsis is this:

Dara is a young woman being sold to a whorehouse in a world reaching it`s expiring date. After being battered senseless by a customer, she is mended by a weird physician, that replaces her left eye with a crystal, making her able to see in total darkness. Which becomes handy since the sun is burning out, and the world keeps getting darker. She gets pregnant by the attacker, and she seeks out revenge. A single-mom with weapons, and an agenda, during the end of days.

I'll take 50 copies, are there pictures?
 
The short synopsis is this:

Dara is a young woman being sold to a whorehouse in a world reaching it`s expiring date. After being battered senseless by a customer, she is mended by a weird physician, that replaces her left eye with a crystal, making her able to see in total darkness. Which becomes handy since the sun is burning out, and the world keeps getting darker. She gets pregnant by the attacker, and she seeks out revenge. A single-mom with weapons, and an agenda, during the end of days.
Blimey.

Can she get a reliable babysitter for when she's out getting vengeance?
 
The short synopsis is this:

Dara is a young woman being sold to a whorehouse in a world reaching it`s expiring date. After being battered senseless by a customer, she is mended by a weird physician, that replaces her left eye with a crystal, making her able to see in total darkness. Which becomes handy since the sun is burning out, and the world keeps getting darker. She gets pregnant by the attacker, and she seeks out revenge. A single-mom with weapons, and an agenda, during the end of days.

You had me at whorehouse
 
The short synopsis is this:

Dara is a young woman being sold to a whorehouse in a world reaching it`s expiring date. After being battered senseless by a customer, she is mended by a weird physician, that replaces her left eye with a crystal, making her able to see in total darkness. Which becomes handy since the sun is burning out, and the world keeps getting darker. She gets pregnant by the attacker, and she seeks out revenge. A single-mom with weapons, and an agenda, during the end of days.

You deserve a Man Booker prize for this sentence alone.
 
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