Just made two Welsh lads run a 1000 miles

[SerenityNigh]

 

[wainy]

In the queue for Popworld there and two Welsh lads came out giving it the big one, anti-English, in Birmingham, so I grab one by the neck and shout ‘F you, I’m Zulu’ then my boyfriend grabs the other one and does the exact same thing and both Welsh lads pray for forgiveness.

The funny thing is is that I’m not even a Blues fan ?

Then after that I see a young lad kicking off against some bouncers so I grab him and say ‘you’re going to arrested, you don’t want this against your record’ and he absolutely floored me.

Good.

 

[The binman chronicles]

That's about five grade points too high.

Now I thought about giving an F to start with but when marking writing you have to appreciate something that surprises you and the fact that they weren't bummed in the end is a remarkable bit of fiction.

 

[Bohemian Toffee]

Now I thought about giving an F to start with but when marking writing you have to appreciate something that surprises you and the fact that they weren't bummed in the end is a remarkable bit of fiction.

I recognise your point, but I felt the whole thing contained enough homo-eroticism without including conclusive, climatic action.

It is certainly a remarkable bit of fiction, no argument there, the product of a fraught, over-indulged imagination. However, it feels, rushed.

Next time I hope the author takes the time to enjoy their craft, tell the story and appreciate their obvious creative skill.

For me, on reflection of your observations I'll settle on a D, but I look forward to their next work with anticipation.

 

[Nymzee]

I recognise your point, but I felt the whole thing contained enough homo-eroticism without including conclusive, climatic action.

It is certainly a remarkable bit of fiction, no argument there, the product of a fraught, over-indulged imagination. However, it feels, rushed.

Next time I hope the author takes the time to enjoy their craft, tell the story and appreciate their obvious creative skill.

For me, on reflection of your observations I'll settle on a D, but I look forward to their next work with anticipation.

I’m sure the OP would settle with a D as well.