I'm not new to hip hop at all but I know how it is constructed, having a hook in it is not a bad thing. So if you care to answer the question I'd like to know where the second verse is.
Go listen to fat Joe and Pun on twins, the rhyme scheme, delivery and beat are what this guy aspires to at his peak. Dead in the middle of little Italy little did he know we riddled the little man who didn't do do diddly.
Go listen to Big's verse in notorious thugs and while you're at it go listen to Capos second verse in waiting for warfare, it's just as deep bra.
Go listen to some Big L. Then go shut the [Poor language removed] up unless you address me as sir cocksucka