Black Sheep (help me finish it)

[Abertonian]

O, Brother, where art thou? No wonder I have been compared to you on here before!

Struggling through life in sunny Scotland

You have?

 

[TyphooToffee]

I should have realized by your name. Aberdeen and Everton?

 

[Abertonian]

I should have realized by your name. Aberdeen and Everton?

Indeed

Sadly neither is especially successful

 

[Brendan Janus]

Have you any wool mate ?

 

[TyphooToffee]

Have you any wool mate ?

Sure, how much would you like?

 

[Brendan Janus]

Six balls of Eastham Rake wools !!

 

[TyphooToffee]

Six balls of Eastham Rake wools !!

OK, please provide your bank and credit card details via my contacts in Nigeria

 

[peteblue]

Just noticed there was something missing in that text. Here it is again, edited.

1. As he looked down on the naked body he felt no shame, no remorse,
   no sense of responsibility whatsoever. If that was the way the
   customer wanted him to deliver the body then so be it. All he thought
   of was the money. But he was also aware that he should be on his
   guard, for it was almost certain that there was a witness to the event.
   Somewhere, those pretty blue eyes were surely watching him, and
   despite the beauty of the beholder he knew there lurked an
   unbalanced mind. Yet this was too profitable for him to be put off by
   some maniac; when his services were in demand he would just have
   to remain alert until the job was done and he had left the scene.
   He looked again at the body. Nice touch that, wrapping it tightly in
   plastic, it kept things nice and clean. No blood on his hands. There
   was no denying he was cold, but the events that would unfold over the next two days made him feel less so. He allowed himself
   a satisfied smile, nodded his head knowingly, and relaxed.
   Relaxing was a mistake.
   Unseen, unheard, his assailant crept from the undergrowth, wild-eyed
   with rage and
   carrying her weapon before her. Her mind was so crazed that even as
   the body fell she failed to recognise it as that of her sister. Even so,
   with her head rocking maniacally from side to side, she rushed at her
   tormentor and buried the weapon deep into his flesh.

I’m glad you edited it. I had picked up on your error regarding ‘him feel less so’ but was wary of mentioning it......

 

[TyphooToffee]

I’m glad you edited it. I had picked up on your error regarding ‘him feel less so’ but was wary of mentioning it......

No need to be wary, just consider yourself my editor